Tuesday, April 28, 2009
"How could you do this to me"
"How could you do this to me?", said the librarian, as the storm moved closer. "My poor books are going to get wet oh no" said the librarian. "Its getting closer so I should get to my library fast before the storm catches to me". So she ran and ran untill she saw that the light was on red and she had to stop, but she was in a hurry she started getting nervouse, untill the the light said walk she ran and ran again untill she got to her library she got so happy that she started singing and dancing. «THE END«
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You have a great start!
ReplyDeleteRe do and add in some paragraphs. Dialogue needs to change the paragraphs.
good job
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