IF I WERE THE PRINCIPAL OF SAGE SCHOOL, SOME OF THE RULES I WOULD CHANGE WOULD BE, I WILL ALLOW THE STUDENTS TO WEAR NORMAL CLOTH BECAUSE WHEN THEY WEAR UNIFORMS THEY STILL BREAK THE RULES WITH EM'. ANOTHER RULE I WOULD CHANGE IS I WILL ALLOW FOR STUDENTS TO CHEW GUM, BECAUSE IT HELPS THEM CONCENTRATE ON THEIR WORK BETTER. ANOTHER ONE OF THE RULES I WOULD CHANGE IS I WOULD LET THE KIDS BRING LIKE CHIPS CANDY AND THEIR DRINKS, BECAUSE THEY ARE KIDS AND TEENS AND THEY GET HUNGRY ALOT, AND MY LAST RULE I WOULD MAKE WOULD BE, THAT IF THE KIDS ARE DOING THEIR WORK AND NOT FOOLING AROUND I WOULD LET THEM USE THEIR iPOD OR MP3. SO THATS WHAT I WOULD DO IF I WAS PRINCIPAL FOR MR. P
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Jocelin,
ReplyDeleteYou have a great first draft.
Changes that I recommend are: 1. Either use transition words for the "list" of rule changes, or use numbers. 2. The post should not be in all caps. I need to see that you know when to capitalize or leave in the lowercase letters.
*snaps* for you and getting a draft so quickly!